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Are not thorns envious of the rose's petals?
as the Romantic's muse, with sanguine vitality
whose purpose is as destined and endeared as love itself
for inspiring the heart to love unambivalently
who in unaltered grace remains forever flawless
with unabashed presence, is compellingly seductive
the radiantly pristine flower is intrinsically precious
heavenly molded to be divinely attractive
a serendipitous beauty hindered by no impair
all despite the malicious jagged thorn's disgrace
who so covet the lovely's ineluctable allure
and ever curses its contritely undesirable place
who in the shadow of an inamorata, deplores this heinous injustice
yet, dwelling not in envy, the rose forever thrives in bliss.
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Author's Comments

A school assignment.
I was told to write a poem. I decided to attempt a sonnet. It worked out, with luck and effort.
Envy is something I experienced and knew very well at the time I wrote this. It was not until I confronted the person I envied that I fully understood how it could be considered one of the seven deadly sins.
I hope the theme of the poem is clear and that my writing is intelligible. I know its verbose and not easily readable but I used the words at my disposal to express my ideas. Thankyou for reading.

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:iconbaggyclothesarah:
I think I got it. :0 While I must say that roses are used in abundance, it's obvious as to why. They are so simple and yet express so much and are a symbol for such powerful things such as the beauty and hardships of love or the envy which you have portrayed with a heavy, but admirable, vocabulary. ;D Nice work, mah dear! :heart: I'm such a amature, there's no way I could critique this. Not like I feel it needs any :0

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:iconprehysteric:
Mur. I definitely think I understood this better the second time through. :/

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:iconlaserninja:
WAHWAHWAHWAH
EMO SHITE LOLO!
I don't get it, way to fancy for my brain

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